Issue 1 - Page 1 (Cover)

4th Jul 2015, 6:24 AM in Birthright - Part 1
Issue 1 - Page 1 (Cover)
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Steven-Vincent 4th Jul 2015, 6:24 AM edit delete
Steven-Vincent
Happy Independence Day, people!

And so it begins... on the 4th of July, which commemorates the birth of the USA, I begin the journey of Liberty Lass, a classical patriotic character based on the Silver/Bronze age style of superheroes.

Since I have designed this webcomic as a more traditional print comic series, with covers and a number of pages similar to print comics, this first 'page' is just the outside front cover, so there isn't much meat to it, and the next page is just the credits. But never fear, we will get into some real 'meat' by page 3.

I've released this issue on a Saturday because today is the 4th of July, but all future releases are planned to take place on Friday.
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Bonsomme 4th Jul 2015, 9:13 AM edit delete reply
Looks great! I'm a big fan of the bronze and silver ages. I'm intrigued.
Steven-Vincent 4th Jul 2015, 10:11 AM edit delete reply
Steven-Vincent
Thanks.

Just be aware that although the style is Bronze Age, it is set in 2016. (I don't want anyone expecting 1970s outfits and such!)
Centcomm 4th Jul 2015, 12:49 PM edit delete reply
Centcomm
looks good so far .. I would have suggested that you posted the "fluff pages all at once." so that you can get readers involved .. but thats my only comment :D
Steven-Vincent 4th Jul 2015, 2:06 PM edit delete reply
Steven-Vincent
That is a good point. But the danger if I do that is that the fluff pages take about as long to do as the meat pages... so if I speed up on those I will eventually (not now, but eventually) run out of content and then we will be waiting > 1 week between postings. Posting fluff as part of the weekly content gives me a chance to stay on target time-wise.
Centcomm 4th Jul 2015, 2:39 PM edit delete reply
Centcomm
hehe I get it .. I used to do a five page a week schedule :D that was MURDER .. oh wait . I still do.. >_< DC and Luna .. AGH! *kills self* I work about 2 months ahead as much as possible . and it does get easyer once you have sets and characters prebuilt
Steven-Vincent 4th Jul 2015, 4:14 PM edit delete reply
Steven-Vincent
Yeah there is no way I could do 5 pages a week... I can get maybe 1 panel done per day. And that does not count doing sets and props.
Tibbittz 4th Jul 2015, 4:23 PM edit delete reply
Tibbittz
Nice start. The poses are dynamic, and there's a great sense of adventurous urgency to it.
Steven-Vincent 4th Jul 2015, 4:24 PM edit delete reply
Steven-Vincent
That is thanks to the folks here giving me good feedback on my first attempt at this cover, which was much less interesting-looking. The toughest part about this comic has been handling the pre-hero-ID parts of the character's life.
Disciple3D.com 9th Nov 2015, 10:43 AM edit delete reply
Disciple3D.com
You have my attention!
Nef 24th Feb 2016, 5:41 PM edit delete reply
Nef
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Fun
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Steven-Vincent 24th Feb 2016, 6:15 PM edit delete reply
Steven-Vincent
Thanks. :)
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