Issue 5 - Page 14

6th Oct 2017, 6:01 PM in Into the Darkness - Part 1
Issue 5 - Page 14
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Steven-Vincent 6th Oct 2017, 6:01 PM edit delete
Steven-Vincent
When I wrote this scene, I had no idea if Abby was going to be able to worm her way out of being discovered or not. One advantage she has is that nobody other than Liberty Man (not even Dr. Synapse) knows how you get the 'Liberty Powers.' And most people probably wouldn't believe it even if they had them explained (even Abby had to be convinced in issue 2).

NOTE:
I have edited this page.Comments from HiFranc and others + what is coming in the next scene made me realize that the kids really need to mention the cell phone issue. It is after all what triggered the entire scene. It's also necessary for the next scene. Just FYI if you see comments about them not mentioning the cell phone, in the original upload of this page, they did not.
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syddent 6th Oct 2017, 7:52 PM edit delete reply
syddent
I was wondering how you were going to manage that as well.
syddent 6th Oct 2017, 7:52 PM edit delete reply
syddent
I was wondering how you were going to manage that.

Well played Abby. Well played.
Steven-Vincent 6th Oct 2017, 8:06 PM edit delete reply
Steven-Vincent
Abby is aided here by the fact that the truth of what happened to her is hard to believe.
Haegan2005 6th Oct 2017, 8:22 PM edit delete reply
Haegan2005
Well done!

and without a lie. Misdirection maybe, but no lie.
Fafhred 6th Oct 2017, 8:17 PM edit delete reply
Fafhred
They have not caught yet on the fact that this happened before she got her powers and Liberty Lass appeared.
They will when they think about it.
Steven-Vincent 6th Oct 2017, 8:51 PM edit delete reply
Steven-Vincent
The scene's not over yet... I won't say anymore.
Fafhred 7th Oct 2017, 4:11 AM edit delete reply
Fafhred
Or she get distracted when leaving the library, get hit by a car, and does not get a scratch xD
Steven-Vincent 7th Oct 2017, 6:22 AM edit delete reply
Steven-Vincent
Yeah that would give it away.
HiFranc 7th Oct 2017, 7:55 AM edit delete reply
HiFranc
They still haven't mentioned the phone call.
Steven-Vincent 7th Oct 2017, 9:06 AM edit delete reply
Steven-Vincent
They were probably going to but Abby has distracted them now.
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